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Tags: begging to be let go Burp Burping Cold cold stomach Digestion F/F Fatal Female Pred Female Prey Head First horror Human Pred Human Prey Identity theft mirror no reformation no reforming Oral Vore Same Size scared prey scary? self vore Self-Vore Stomach Noises texting Uncaring Pred Unwilling Unwilling Prey Vore story voretober voretober 2021 Weight Gain Willing Pred writing
Elise loved to be beautiful, and she did it for no one but herself. Unfortunately, that's the one person who took notice...and she's playing for keeps.
Day 15 of Voretober is here, and today’s prompt is “Mirror.”
Once again, I'm getting in the spirit of October by actually writing a story that I would consider pretty spooky! I really enjoyed myself while writing this. I'm curious if others will enjoy reading it, too.
Can you believe it? We are nearly halfway done with Voretober! I couldn't have gotten this far without the support I've received. I hope I can finish the challenge strong.
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Posted by MetalSlime 3 years ago Report
Would mirror!Elise even show up in a mirror?
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
That's a good question! I like to think that she doesn't. Adds more drama that way.
Posted by LemonBarb 3 years ago Report
... Or in before if she preys on subsequent meals, they show up as her own 'mirror' self instead. Or, y'know. She devours/absorbs 'reflections' of everyone else, and grows more powerful over time due to that?
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
Potentially! In my initial musings for this story, I thought about having Elise appearing in the mirror herself following her digestion. But I decided against it
Posted by LemonBarb 3 years ago Report
Thinking back on that comment, reading the story again. The only canary on that, was no foreshadow within the story explicitly, over a lack of reflection... So, could depend? On say, "Elise" being stuck as a Mirror's reflection... assuming, a reflection even has a shadow?
Posted by Mechdragon1k 3 years ago Report
I would assume the original one shows up in a mirror, makes sense and would be highly awkward.
Posted by ClosetedTiny 3 years ago Report
Nope, there is nothing to reflect. She stepped out of the mirror world in order to inhabit the material world, consuming her counterpart.
Posted by ClosetedTiny 3 years ago Report
Damn, that was pretty creepy, good job!
And aside from everything being inverted, no one would be able to tell the difference in Elise!
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
I'm glad it seemed a little scary! Yeah, the whole thing is that Mirror Elise completely takes over Original Elise's life, and no one is the wiser.
Posted by Quartersnake 3 years ago Report
Gosh, mirror preds are insanely hot. I really love their motivations, and that burp towards the end was just perfect.
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it!!